(a haiku)
Skin pricks, heart beats fast
Hands tighten round shark-skin haft.
Embers in the black.
Prof. Androne sez:
Haft of what?
This one puzzles me.
Grade: Check
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(a haiku)
Skin pricks, heart beats fast
Hands tighten round shark-skin haft.
Embers in the black.
Prof. Androne sez:
Haft of what?
This one puzzles me.
Grade: Check
Comments are closed.
Did you ask what you needed for a check +?
It was Richard Androne. I think he felt it needed more context for the average reader to get much out of it.
Oh – I see you wrote that now. That’s even funnier that “he” gave it just a check. The irony is that you gave it a context with his grade and comment.