Crayfish
March 1st, 2008 @ 8:43 am by Peter(a haiku)
Hands in cool water
snatch brown armor, red tipped claws.
Pail full, wet trek home.
Prof. Androne Sez: Vivid. I like this one. Grade: Check +
What Lurks Ahead
February 29th, 2008 @ 8:13 am by Peter(a haiku)
Skin pricks, heart beats fast
Hands tighten round shark-skin haft.
Embers in the black.
Prof. Androne sez:
Haft of what?
This one puzzles me.
Grade: Check