Crayfish
March 1st, 2008 @ 8:43 am by Peter(a haiku)
Hands in cool water
snatch brown armor, red tipped claws.
Pail full, wet trek home.
Prof. Androne Sez: Vivid. I like this one. Grade: Check +
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March 1st, 2008 @ 9:16 am
Great! So that was the grading rubric. There weren’t any check -’s were there?
March 1st, 2008 @ 10:23 am
Not on those poems.
Actually those two haikus were submitted on the same sheet but got graded separately. The only other things I kept from my time with Prof. Androne were a couple papers on the short stories and poems we read.