What Lurks Ahead
February 29th, 2008 @ 8:13 am by Peter(a haiku)
Skin pricks, heart beats fast
Hands tighten round shark-skin haft.
Embers in the black.
Prof. Androne sez:
Haft of what?
This one puzzles me.
Grade: Check
(a haiku)
Skin pricks, heart beats fast
Hands tighten round shark-skin haft.
Embers in the black.
Prof. Androne sez:
Haft of what?
This one puzzles me.
Grade: Check
February 29th, 2008 @ 3:36 pm
Did you ask what you needed for a check +?
March 1st, 2008 @ 1:15 am
It was Richard Androne. I think he felt it needed more context for the average reader to get much out of it.
March 1st, 2008 @ 7:03 am
Oh - I see you wrote that now. That’s even funnier that “he” gave it just a check. The irony is that you gave it a context with his grade and comment.